写译 — 《晚泊浔阳望庐山》孟浩然

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• 写译 — 《晚泊浔阳望庐山》 孟浩然

【原文内容】

• 晚泊浔阳望庐山
  【唐】孟浩然
  挂席几千里，名山都未逢。
  泊舟浔阳郭，始见香炉峰。
  尝读远公传，永怀尘外踪。
  东林精舍近，日暮空闻钟。

【第一版翻译：（润色前，手译）】

• Mount Lu Viewed from Xunyang at Dusk
  【唐】Meng haoran
  I went through thousands miles of rivers by sailboat, but actually didn't meet any single mount of interest.
  I began to realize the significant distinction of the Incensory Mound when I parked my boat out of Xunyang City.
  I once read the biography of marquis Huiyuan whose traces beyond the Mortal Realm attracted me a lot.
  The monk's crib was within reach though, suddenly, I heard the transmitted sound of temple bell in the distance.

【第二版翻译：（润色后，雅思水准）】

• Mount Lu Viewed from Xunyang at Dusk
  【Tang Dynasty】Meng haoran
  I sailed thousands of miles along the rivers, yet actually encountered no famous mountains.
  It was only when I moored my boat outside Xunyang City that I began to realize the extraordinary distinction of the Incensory Mound.
  I once read the brief biography of Master Huiyuan whose traces beyond the Mortal Realm have always captivated me.
  The monk's crib in Donglin Temple was seemingly within reach though, suddenly, I heard the transmitted sound of a temple bell in the distance.

【许渊冲老师版本】

• Mount Lu Viewed from Xunyang at Dusk
  【Tang Dynasty】Meng haoran
  For miles and miles I sail and float, High famed mountains are hard to seek.
  By riverside I moor my boat, Then I perceive the Censer Peak.
  Knowing the hermit's life and way, I love his solitary dell.
  His hermitage not far away, I hear at sunset but the bell.

【生词整理】

1. 英文词汇：
   • go through：phrase.经历，完成，通过，仔细检查
   • thousands of：phrase.(固定搭配) 数以千计的，成千上万的
   • sail：v.航行，驾（船）；n.帆，航行，航海
   • sailboat：n.帆船
   • It was only when... that... ：phrase.直到...才...
   • moor：v.系住，使停泊；n.沼泽，荒野；高沼地的草原；猎场
   • marquis：n.侯爵
   • captivate：v.迷住，迷惑
   • traces beyond the Mortal Realm：phrase.尘外之踪
   • within reach：phrase.近在眼前
   • crib：v.抄袭，剽窃；n.（带围栏的）婴儿车，（马、牛的）饲料槽，（考试作弊用的）夹带，房间，公寓
   • transmit：v.传送，传输，传播，传染，传递
   • in the distance：phrase.在远处
   • dell：n.（里面或周围有树的）小山谷
   • hermit：n.隐士，隐居者，遁世者
   • hermitage：n.隐居处，修道院
2. 中文词汇：
   • 挂席：指船扬帆行驶。
   • 香炉峰：庐山中的名峰。
   • 远公：指晋代高僧慧远。
   • 精舍：特指慧远的禅舍。

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