年龄限制话题
原句
From my own experience, I see friends feeling pain for getting married when they were under 18.
改进
From my own experience, I have seen friends feeling pain because they got married when they were under 18.
原句
Moreover, another important factor to consider is that people who are under 18 are unable to take care themselves independently.
改进
Moreover, another important factor to consider is that people who are under 18 are unable to take care of themselves independently.
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原句
Getting married means people have to consider many things, such as having babies. And people who are under 18 should not be allowed to having sex to make babies.
改进
Getting married means people have to consider many things, such as having babies. People who are under 18 should not be allowed to have sex to have babies.
首先：be allowed to do sth. 不能用doing。 是have babies而不是make babies。
原句
To begin with, the primary reason why I firmly believe that there should be an age restriction for getting married is that marriage is a big deal in our society.
改进
To begin with, the primary reason why I firmly believe that there should be an age restriction for getting married is that marriage is a significant event in our society.
a big deal的用法不太熟练，用significant event比较稳妥
digital materials 话题
- digital materials is that textbooks play an important role in education. （如果忘记education是否需要加the，就把 education 改为 our society）
- Some people like textbooks. If universities do not update textbooks anymore, there will be a lot of disadvantages for people who are unable to use computers.
- From a social standpoint, the ultimate goal of our society is to ensure people can pursue their goals./ ensure people's well-being.
- Digital materials allow people to pursue their goals while being employed (这个句子基本是万能的，把Digital materials替换成其它话题就行)
- digital materials make long-distance learning possible （make sth. possible）
Building Effects
design通常情况下不可数，为了避免语法错误，统一使用 the good design of buildings
it plays an important role in people's lives. 注意这句话的lives，不能使用life。不熟练使用的话，干脆就不要用了
In today's world, the topic of whether the design of buildings affects positively where people live and work has sparked numerous debates and garnered significant public attention. Some people think the design of buildings affects negatively where people live and work. From my perspective, the design of buildings affects positively where people live and work for several compelling reasons.
To begin with, the primary reason why I firmly believe that the design of buildings affects positively where people live and work is that the good design of buildings can make people feel happy. While it is essential to consider the positive and negative impacts of the design of buildings, I still assert that the design of buildings has profoundly affected people's lives in numerous ways. If the design of buildings is wonderful, people will feel happy. And it is beneficial to people's health. The renowned author Carl Sagan once remarked that the design of buildings affected his work positively. This clearly illustrates that the design of buildings affects positively where people live and work.
Moreover, another important factor to consider is that the good design of buildings can improve people's efficiency. From a social standpoint, the ultimate goal of our society is to ensure people's well-being. A recent study published by Scientific American highlighted that the good design of buildings can improve people's working efficiency, and it plays an important role in people's lives. This undoubtedly indicates that the design of buildings affects positively where people work.
In conclusion, I maintain that the design of buildings affects positively where people live and work due to the compelling reasons above.
Experiential Learning
我曾经写作：From my own experience, I benefit from experiential learning by building real software systems when I was in college.这句话有语法错误，需要将benefit 改为 benefited。为了避免误用，还是将 when I was in college 删去较稳妥
In today's world, the topic of whether experiential learning can work well in high schools or colleges has sparked numerous debates and garnered significant public attention. Some people think a traditional form of teaching is the best. From my perspective, experiential learning can work well in high schools or colleges for several compelling reasons.
To begin with, the primary reason why I firmly believe that experiential learning can work well in high schools or colleges is that it can provide a lot of useful knowledge which the traditional form of teaching will not provide. While it is essential to consider the positive and negative impacts of experiential learning, I still assert that experiential learning has profoundly affected people's lives in numerous ways. From my own experience, I benefit from experiential learning by building real software systems. The renowned author Carl Sagan once remarked that his success was mostly credited to experiential learning. This clearly illustrates that experiential learning can work well in high schools and colleges.
Moreover, another important factor to consider is that experiential learning is more impactful. From a social standpoint, the ultimate goal of our society is to ensure people's well-being. People are more likely to remember the knowledge they gain from experiential learning. A recent study published by Scientific American highlighted that 88% of students in the United States say experiential learning stimulates them to make great progress. This undoubtedly indicates that experiential learning can work well in high schools and colleges.
In conclusion, I maintain that experiential learning can work well in high schools or colleges due to the compelling reasons above.
AI for Teaching
这个题目，我之前着重于AI可以帮我翻译，总结文章等，十分难写，而且内容分只有2/3，未能拿满分。现在重写，着重于通用句子：benefit form xxx; his success was mostly credited to xxx; make great progress ... 然后拿满分了
In today's world, the topic of whether Artificial Intelligence is good in the teaching field has sparked numerous debates and garnered significant public attention. From my perspective, Artificial Intelligence is good in the teaching field for several compelling reasons.
To begin with, the primary reason why I firmly believe that Artificial Intelligence is good in the teaching field is that it can provide a lot of useful information. While it is essential to consider the positive and negative impacts of Artificial Intelligence, I still assert that Artificial Intelligence has profoundly affected people's lives in numerous ways. From my own experience, Artificial Intelligence can teach me how to write beautiful codes, and it can help me to find bugs. I benefit from using Artificial Intelligence. The renowned author Carl Sagan once remarked that Artificial Intelligence taught him a lot and his success was mostly credited to Artificial Intelligence. This clearly illustrates that Artificial Intelligence is good in the teaching field.
Moreover, another important factor to consider is that Artificial Intelligence can give instant feedback. From a social standpoint, the ultimate goal of our society is to ensure people can pursue their goals. People can pursue their goals with the help of Artificial Intelligence since it is available all the time. A recent study published by Scientific American highlighted that 88% of students in the United States say they make great progress with the help of Artificial Intelligence. This undoubtedly indicates that Artificial Intelligence is good in the teaching field.
In conclusion, I maintain that Artificial Intelligence is good in the teaching field due to the compelling reasons above.
Formal Written Examination
It can test if you have really master the knowledge. 的master要改为mastered
stimulate students to take effort to pass tests中的take effort要改为make an effort
In today's world, the topic of whether formal written examinations are a valid method has sparked numerous debates and garnered significant public attention. From my perspective, formal written examinations are a valid method for several compelling reasons.
To begin with, the primary reason why I firmly believe that formal written examinations are a valid method is that formal written examinations are fair. While it is essential to consider the positive and negative impacts of formal written examinations, I still assert that formal written examinations have profoundly affected people's lives in numerous ways. Everyone has to deal with the same written examination and it is fair. It can test if you have really mastered the knowledge. The renowned author Carl Sagan once remarked that formal written examinations gave him a fair opportunity to go to colleges. This clearly illustrates that formal written examinations are a valid method.
Moreover, another important factor to consider is that formal written examinations can stimulate students to make an effort to pass tests. From a social standpoint, the ultimate goal of our society is to ensure people's well-being. Formal written examinations can deepen our appreciation of knowledge. A recent study published by Scientific American highlighted that 88% of students in the United States say formal written examinations encourage them to make great progress to pass the tests. This undoubtedly indicates that formal written examinations are a valid method.
In conclusion, I maintain that formal written examinations are a valid method due to the compelling reasons above.
