讨论法律的文章:
- Laws can protect people's property and punish criminals (当表达财产时,"property" 通常是不可数名词。它指的是某人拥有的所有财产或不动产的集合。因此,你通常不会说 "properties" 来指代一般意义上的财产。)
- And the government can arrest criminals according to laws and protect our society
- A recent study published by Scientific American highlighted that laws make people more likely to behave properly
- Laws deter people from committing crimes
讲述公司名誉和短期策略的文章:
-
reputation不可数
-
"Their goods are bad" 语法上是正确的,但有些地方可以改进,使表达更具体或自然。例如,你可以更明确地说明这些商品有什么问题:"Their products are of poor quality." (不会用goods就用products代替)
-
To begin with, the primary reason why I firmly believe that companies should place emphasis on the reputation is that it can bring them a lot of repeat consumers.
-
错误句子:If the products are bad, consumer will not buy it even they provide discounts and special offers.
具体改进如下:
-
主语和谓语的一致性:
- "consumer" 应该改为复数形式 "consumers",以与谓语动词 "will not buy" 保持一致。
-
代词的使用:
- "it" 应该改为复数形式 "them",以与前面的 "products" 保持一致。
-
连接词的使用:
- "even they provide discounts and special offers" 改为 "even if they provide discounts and special offers"。在表示条件或假设时,"even if" 更为合适。
-
句子结构:
- 保持句子结构简单明了,确保意思清晰传达。
优化后的句子:
"If the products are bad, consumers will not buy them even if they provide discounts and special offers."
- 错误句子:Moreover, another important factor to consider is that short-term strategies like the discounts will harm companies' profit ability. 具体改进如下:
-
冠词的使用:
- "the discounts" 改为 "discounts"。在这种情况下,"discounts" 是泛指各种折扣,不需要特定的冠词 "the"。
-
词汇选择:
- "profit ability" 改为 "profitability"。"Profitability" 是一个更常用且更准确的词,表示公司的盈利能力。
-
句子结构:
- 保持句子结构简单明了,确保意思清晰传达。
优化后的句子:
Moreover, another important factor to consider is that short-term strategies like discounts will harm companies' profitability.
但是改为这个更好写:Moreover, another important factor to consider is that short-term strategies like discounts will increase companies' financial burden.
Best teacher的文章
- experience is more effective than formal school study is that it can provide a lot of knowledge which formal school would not provide. (这里的school用单数,指的是一种教育体系或概念)
- From my own experience, I benefit from building a real sofeware system and that experience is more effective than formal school study.
- We always forget the knowledge we get from schools, but we are likely to remember the knowledge we get from experience